tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post4808992766616394832..comments2009-02-09T22:54:48.621-05:00Comments on Publish Kestrel: Chapter ThreeKestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-54778403064377981692008-08-31T02:43:00.000-04:002008-08-31T02:43:00.000-04:00I wish it was in print too! I have been steadily p...I wish it was in print too! I have been steadily plugging along, trying to let it flow easily. It's been hard with so much going on here lately, but I am thrilled with what I have so far.<BR/><BR/>I am so glad you are enjoying it, it really validates the way I feel about it. Do you get that from your writing as well? Cuz I'm hooked on your story too...<BR/><BR/>I don't know what you call it when Kestrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-37330933898183572022008-08-31T00:14:00.000-04:002008-08-31T00:14:00.000-04:00Hey kestrel, how's the writing going? I wish your ...Hey kestrel, how's the writing going? I wish your book was in print cuz I can't put it down! What do you call it when you can "see what you read" in your head like a movie? lol * iburbpzb! you're excused :PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-66358865014360827452008-08-30T16:45:00.000-04:002008-08-30T16:45:00.000-04:00Hey Kristen, I agree with you about the castration...Hey Kristen, I agree with you about the castration thing if they are asking for it.<BR/><BR/>I think you are coming along with your new story beautifully, so I think you will get there eventually. It might help you to write up a character profile for each of your main characters, think about what motivates them and why they do things the way they do... I have Character Profiles up on my other Kestrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-988012204772200702008-08-30T16:33:00.000-04:002008-08-30T16:33:00.000-04:00castration wouldnt be cruel if they asked for it i...castration wouldnt be cruel if they asked for it in my opinion. <BR/><BR/>but i really cant wait until the next chapter, i love how you have your characters with such a strong sense of identity on here. i really wish that i could end up doing that with mine._-*Kristen*-_https://www.blogger.com/profile/09808714973526415081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-56395538641531035212008-08-29T12:10:00.000-04:002008-08-29T12:10:00.000-04:00Faye - I know Malik is a little blurry at this poi...Faye - I know Malik is a little blurry at this point in the story, I am ironing out his kinks so I can describe him best... He is the kind of guy that lives life from the outside, he is the "watcher", reporting back on what he sees, but never really belonging or participating. He thinks he prefers it that way, but he is finding it harder not to become involved as he sees what his country is, and Kestrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-25507050376619782432008-08-29T10:41:00.000-04:002008-08-29T10:41:00.000-04:00Hmm eighteen might be better, or maybe even sevent...Hmm eighteen might be better, or maybe even seventeen because since she has to wait a year before she takes the throne then she'll be eighteen.<BR/><BR/>Ah, it's under the research label. :3<BR/>We talked about castration in my Criminology class a few semesters back. Basically it was about castration of sex offenders, to keep them from offending again. But yeah, it is eww, especially when they doArielle Fragassihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09677234688036590774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-53659981011936367212008-08-29T00:11:00.000-04:002008-08-29T00:11:00.000-04:00I love the opposing motivations you got going here...I love the opposing motivations you got going here. Syndra is "all business" and Malik is well...I don't know yet. Great ending to chapter 3!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-81070626984751293352008-08-28T11:42:00.000-04:002008-08-28T11:42:00.000-04:00I am thinking of making her older, maybe eighteen?...I am thinking of making her older, maybe eighteen? <BR/>But you forget about her age as the story goes on so it becomes less of a big deal... For now I'm just writing as the story came to me...<BR/><BR/>You'll have to wait and see what happens, Some interesting twists in the future... but I wanted to include a description of what exactly happens to a Companion... ;) But yes you would know if you Kestrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-50150673891735629252008-08-28T11:24:00.000-04:002008-08-28T11:24:00.000-04:00Love it! Even though when I was sixteen, I still t...Love it! Even though when I was sixteen, I still thought sex was gross. ;)<BR/><BR/>Can they just pretend he got castrated? I mean, since they don't lose any body parts, no one will know!Arielle Fragassihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09677234688036590774noreply@blogger.com