tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-48876989749005686422024-03-14T03:45:49.296-04:00Publish KestrelA little about me... Hardworking mother of three, with dreams to become a published writer one day... Until that time, just blogging away!
Just in case you weren't aware, whatever I write is protected by copyright law, just like whatever you write is... So don't steal, it's bad karma!Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125truetag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-26115477984723351242012-08-27T00:56:00.002-04:002012-08-27T00:56:46.751-04:00Salome - Chapter Four
Chapter Four
Salome arrived at her townhouse, her nerves in a tangle,
though outwardly she displayed a calm appearance. She fetched her papers and tossed
the reins of her horse to the stable lad, a bright young man by the name of
Toby, and proceeded into the kitchen where Toby’s mother held reign.
Irene Tyndall was a
widow, but she was still quite a young woman. She was possessed of Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-87499176166427794012012-08-20T07:14:00.000-04:002012-08-20T07:14:04.893-04:00Salome - Chapter Three
Chapter Three
Salome had spent all morning poring over the stack of files
that divulged so many secrets she had to wonder if there were truly any
respectable men in all of London. The few men who seemed devoid of lecherous
behavior and questionable morals were, to put it mildly, a bore. She tried to
console herself with the fact that she had not actually met a single gentleman
in person.
Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-69007736491849913792012-08-13T09:56:00.004-04:002012-08-13T09:56:59.656-04:00Salome - Chapter Two
Donovan Tremaine descended the steps of his carriage and
looked about his surroundings. It was invigorating to be near the London Docks;
it reminded him of home. Even after two years in England, since that fateful
day an unknown solicitor arrived on his doorstep in Norfolk, Virginia to inform
him that he had inherited the title of Earl of Verney, England would never
truly be his home. The idea Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-88522379695861608732012-08-05T22:43:00.001-04:002012-08-05T22:43:52.513-04:00Salome - Chapter One
Chapter One
Though much of the city still slept, the London Docks were
already bustling in the early grey fog that commonly preceded dawn. Ships were
being unloaded, vendors were setting up wares, and the air was filled with the
sound of carts rumbling over cobblestones, and the curses of their drivers and
passersby. Through this hubbub, a caped figure rode astride a fine gray gelding,
Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-2808847844674996572012-07-31T11:54:00.003-04:002012-07-31T11:54:53.924-04:00Salome - Prologue
Prologue
March 1, 1811 London, England
The crowd outside St. James Palace was still rather
impressive, despite the slight chill in the air. Though the official start of
the London Season lay a few weeks away, the newly appointed Prince Regent’s
ball drew crowds of commoners in droves to view the spectacle of the
aristocracy as they arrived for the event. There was no better way for those
who Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-44767818739649257862009-11-17T15:23:00.003-05:002009-11-17T15:32:47.207-05:00Fantastic Inspirational SprintSo I had such a brainstorm today, was able to hammer out 3500 words in a very powerful scene, all inspired by the idea that Kate would encounter one particular historical character... going to post what I wrote today, just be warned, it's rather intense...I won't reveal who the historical character is, let's see if you can figure it out... :)Kate stayed late in the saloon that night, tucked away Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-58247372531180289242009-11-14T13:22:00.002-05:002009-11-14T13:26:16.692-05:00Sorry...You know how life is, it gets in the way...Back again from a very long break in posting, and I know anyone who's been checking on me is going to be sad to hear it, but a horrifying case of writer's block has stopped the "Empress" story in it's tracks at Chapter 10 -New story, NaNoWriMo style - going to the "Twins" story awhile back - trying a different approach, rather than the straightforward Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-77116425806723131472009-02-16T12:54:00.000-05:002009-02-16T12:55:03.054-05:00Real Feedback!So I had submitted awhile back for "First Page Saturday" at Dear Author, and this Saturday was my day! Some very helpful comments were posted, so check it out!Dear AuthorKestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-1397676967649508802009-01-27T10:51:00.002-05:002009-01-27T10:54:48.401-05:00Looooooong Break!Hey everyone, I know, I know it has been awhile...Let's just say the last few months have been cah-razy!!!! I have unfortunately had to back-burner my writing while I focus on finishing up my degree and working. i have just been promoted to a location manager position (in only 4 months!), so my schedule is beyond ridiculous! If you have been checking in hoping for new chapters, I hope I can get Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-79601191358436376282008-10-17T15:04:00.003-04:002008-10-17T15:24:25.476-04:00Chapter TenWord Count: 3,859 At last, the sun began to sink behind the mountains, and Malik-Tor maneuvered them off the road to set up camp beside a stream. They had been riding steadily all day, taking breaks only to relieve themselves or to water the horses. They even ate on horseback. By this time, Syndra-Kai felt drained in body and mind, sliding off her horse and staring blankly as Malik instructed herKestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-63877678408203441012008-10-10T10:07:00.002-04:002008-10-10T10:23:18.660-04:00Chapter NineWord Count: 4,087 Shortly after leaving the farm, Malik-Tor and Syndra-Kai arrived at a crossroads and turned west. They continued to travel for about an hour, when Malik finally took pity on Syndra, who was obviously uncomfortable, perched precariously on the saddle and hanging on for dear life. Her horse was prancing as well, sensing that her rider was unskilled. Syndra slid down from the horseKestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-8226529453743319352008-10-02T16:08:00.002-04:002008-10-02T16:29:50.308-04:00Chapter EightWord Count: 3,364 Xan-Rul typically rose with the sun, but the evening of Syndra-Kai’s Initiation left him feeling unsettled, so he woke earlier than usual, and opted for meditation instead of sleep. As the sun crested the eastern horizon, there was a soft knock at his door. When he answered, a small child handed him a folded piece of paper and quickly darted back down the hall. Opening it, Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-57809375047880288002008-09-23T16:25:00.002-04:002008-09-23T16:28:40.531-04:00Chapter SevenWord Count: 3,164 A few moments passed, and Malik-Tor shifted to Syndra-Kai’s side, his manhood slipping from her, one leg remaining entangled with hers. Careful not to wake him, she slid out of the bed and strode to a basin filled with cool water. She felt a stickiness between her legs, residue from their lovemaking, so she took a cloth and wet it to wash herself. As she pulled the cloth away, Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-85686800065480424532008-09-15T17:44:00.000-04:002008-09-15T17:45:26.647-04:00Sorry for delay....Sorry about the delay everyone, my job officially started last week, plus I had a few exams and research papers to wrap up... But two chapters posted today, so check em out! You also have probably noticed I've added an "Adult Content" warning... You'll know why after reading these chapters, they are pretty hot stuff! Enjoy...Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-37081105739694065932008-09-15T17:40:00.002-04:002008-09-15T17:43:39.906-04:00Chapter SixWord Count: 2,965“Oh, I hate that man,” Syndra-Kai whispered as she and Malik-Tor followed a servant down the corridor leading to her chambers.“Who is he?” Malik-Tor asked.“He is my father’s Chief Advisor. He is a pompous ass though, and I hope I can be rid of him soon.”Malik-Tor laughed at Syndra-Kai’s language. “I did not think Princesses knew such words.”“Have you seen the size of our library?Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-16989503696111527162008-09-15T17:19:00.000-04:002008-09-15T17:21:55.088-04:00Chapter FiveWord Count: 2,707Sunset approached, and Syndra-Kai’s insides started to flutter, as if a bird was struggling against the confines of her ribcage and her belly. As Xan-Rul took her hand to lead her to her last dinner as the child Princess of the Empire of the Silver Crescent, she laid a hand over her heart, as if to still its mad pace. “It is normal to be nervous, Princess. Calm your fears, you Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-58135017731658601862008-09-03T11:52:00.004-04:002008-09-03T16:05:25.867-04:00Chapter FourWord Count: 2,501 The morning of Syndra-Kai’s Initiation dawned clear and bright. Today was a day like no other. Today, she became a woman, but not quite yet. Her actual transformation from child into woman did not begin until sunset; at that time, she and Malik-Tor would be alone in her chambers until morning.First, she was bathed and perfumed. Next, she spent in a period of meditation. She Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-48089927666163948322008-08-28T06:35:00.003-04:002008-09-03T16:03:22.151-04:00Chapter ThreeWord Count: 3,463 The next morning, Syndra-Kai visited her father while he breakfasted, as she usually did. Since the Regent’s breakfast was typically an affair of state, with much business conducted over the hearty fare, it was quite common to have visitors. Syndra did not eat with her father, to avoid showing her face to outsiders. This morning however, her father ate alone, aside from his Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com9tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-70807179759962883462008-08-22T10:01:00.003-04:002008-08-23T17:06:01.900-04:00Chapter TwoWord Count: 3,126“Princess, this is highly unconventional, not to mention improper.” Xan-Rul kept pace easily with the diminutive Princess as she marched purposefully down the long corridor to the East wing, which held Malik-Tor. “It may be unconventional or improper, but it is not against the law. It is well within my right to want to speak to my future Companion,” Syndra-Kai said, with a Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com12tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-29260534486410183832008-08-16T17:50:00.004-04:002008-08-23T17:06:12.785-04:00Chapter OneAnd now, the moment you have all been waiting for.... Word Count: 3,540CHAPTER ONE Golden light streamed through the glass dome that covered the Hall of Lunatium, the capital of Lunatia, the Empire of the Silver Crescent. Granite pillars lined the walls of the oval Hall, and its marble floor gleamed with the rays of the morning sun. A pair of Imperial Guards stood at each of the doors Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-84579012616525964092008-08-11T09:40:00.004-04:002008-08-16T00:51:26.654-04:00And the winner is...So I got to thinking, and maybe a month was a little too long to run a poll for, especially when I am anxious to get to writing.I am announcing the winning story from the poll, and it is.... EMPRESS (Actual title to follow eventually.)Thank you to everyone who voted and commented, I have taken your thoughts into consideration, and some of you have inspired me to pursue things in different Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-46904288838876613802008-08-04T16:12:00.004-04:002008-08-16T00:51:15.026-04:00Update to Poll, Reality UpdateI had to take down the poll and re-do it, as well as temporarily suspend my elf story idea.The reason for this is because the "bad guy" in the story was based on someone very close to my family (made evil by the wonder that is FICTION), and I just received word that this person was killed in a car accident earlier today. I am honestly in a little bit of shock, it seems so unreal.I feel that it Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-34076070553939182922008-08-04T09:35:00.004-04:002008-08-16T00:51:01.761-04:00Reminder...Because this is such a new blog, and because I have to get my brain in gear to do some serious writing, I put the poll up for a month, to generate some interest and hopefully get 100 votes. That way I know I've gotten a true representation of what people are interested in. In the meantime, keep checking back, and be sure to check out my companion blog, which I am working on a character Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-52690779015689506252008-07-28T13:28:00.003-04:002008-08-04T16:10:45.754-04:00Story IdeasI will try to list the ideas I have for stories in the order I have put the most work into them, so keep that in mind when deciding for the poll what you would like to see me work on. I will list them by the main character's name, if I have it yet.1. GyrfalkeI've probably put more work into this story than any other. Gyrfalke lives at the tail end of the Hundred Years War, in France. She works Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com14tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4887698974900568642.post-39332350395033617262008-07-28T13:18:00.001-04:002008-08-16T00:50:49.182-04:00Here we go...Ok, so here's the plan...I love to write, but I get cold feet about it. My fiance doesn't get my interest in romance novels, and I'm a little isolated as a stay at home mom. My friends live far away now, and have their own lives going on, it's not like it was when I first started writing and we used to critique each other all the time.I also have a serious problem with motivation. I'll get Kestrelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04377506516687501785noreply@blogger.com5